I do not know if I have been clear in what I wanted to say and I apologize for using some quotations from the Bible for this piece, or even with the use of God in the title. This is inspired by a true to life experience which has left me with a failing faith. This is not in any way intended for other purposes except for me to express my true sentiments as of the moment.

You do not have to apologize for how you feel dear Liz This is truly a great write

I am in tears after reading this. My dear sweet beautiful Lady, what an intense and heart-wrenching write. It makes my stomach churn and my chest shudder. So very well written, though, and just teeming with emotion. I don't know the story or reason behind writing this, but I am sending much love to you, Mel, always <3

Added to favs for sure.

I thought that this was a very brave write and not in the way that some may thinnk in using bible references etc but more for writing your own truth....for finding it....I don't want to speak out of turn so I will leave it there, however never consider aspects of this as failure.....ever xx

Ben x

Oh boy... Where to begin, what do I say I do not know.

I've been gone for a while and every time I thought about poetry... I've thought about your work... how you combine simplicity with an absolute deep message! Great work!

Oh my goodness. I am speechless and apologies for missing this gem

Hey Mel.

Just seen this one, absolutely amazing

Craig x

Lady Mel, I am sorry I missed this. Tbis is such a powerful write. Blown away with the content. Well done-

Wow. I’m so sorry a person who’s supposed to represent God did such a thing. I can relate because it has happened to me. But I just wanted to tell you that the revenge of God is the best one and he will not let such a thing go unpunished. I hope God heals all your wounds and restores your faith and trust in him. ??

this is so moving! you really have a gift!