Though there is nothing incredibly special about this piece I was drawn to it because I know what this feels like, as I'm sure many others do, and I enjoyed this because it's kind of something I wanted to be reminded of this time of year - if that makes sense.

Sorry this wasn't a fabulous comment, but I feel like every piece deserves honest feedback even if it is mundane or off the wall.

P.s. Consider trying something other than capitalizing the first letter of all lines, because it detracts from the importance of each line, if you want to try something different or practice other styles - if you're happy as is then totally ignore this!