There is a lot of imagery in this piece that made the scene clear and allowed some symbolism to seep in, but I can't really say that there was much about this that screamed as something memorable. However, I appreciate the limitation of cliche aspects and the release that I'm sure followed the penning of this.

Some subtle rhyming lends a melancholic melody to what is a sad but well written piece indeed.

A warm welcome to the site,

Ben