What a beautiful write, Michael, and I have to say, the personification of the trees in the third stanza is astoundingly well done.

All the best as ever,

Ben

What a great descriptive poetical language you have developed my friend. I just enjoyed reading it even without the aid of my wits!!

Michael
Firstly isnt it amazing watching one season change to the next?
I just love all the little signs in nature.

Secondly it's amazing you are heading into winter, and we are heading into Summer. Day light savings has hit and days seem sunnier for longer. At the moment it's raining, but when the heat finally hits, we are for a hot few months!

Back to this beautiful piece of poetry. The stanzas are so wonderfully penned and each has its own little structure describing its own part of nature. from the trees, to the land, to the birds... I truely enjoyed this from begining to end.

Think of us not as skeletons
For we are resting life
We make your air throughout warm times
But the cold is our respite

You know that we shall bloom again
And we will shall shroud the world in green
Perhaps give you a flower or two
Their beauty not yet seen.

Michael, this is just lovely! Your visuals are stunning and just flowed so beautifully. Well done my friend-

Brilliant Michael! I so dislike being cold but you see the beauty in even the harsher weather with your amazing descriptives. Love it! :-) x
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Growing up in Germany and it was cold but we all had red cheeks I guess that was the beauty of it. Enjoyed reading. All the very best

This is very beautiful, Michael. Brilliant work.

Congrats on your win, Michael!!!

Congratulations!

Congratulations Michael! A well deserved win!

So pleased this hot a win, well deserved

Craig

Congrats on the win Michael!
Well deserved!

Wow! what a beautiful composition it is :)