"One day, our paths will cross each other,
and I will drown in the beauty of your eyes."

That just hit home and made me smile. Thanks :)

This is so enchanting dear Naaz. See you did it again.

Thanks David and Maher

Aw Naaz, excellent stuff! Love it :-) x
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Beautiful

Naazz, such a lovely write. I love the story with this.

A beautiful enchanting piece about the universal wish for true love. Nice visuals, nice rhyming and a piece that makes the reader feel the emotions portrayed. It made me wish that love to come to the writer. Talking to stars, "Dream catchers catching our dreams in the night of the fireflies" inspires lovely imagery. Milly x

An enchanting piece wishing for love. Nice visuals, nice rhyming and a piece that makes the reader also wish that love to come to the writer. "Dream catchers catching our dreams in the night of the fireflies" inspires lovely imagery. Milly x

Thanks you so much dear Milly, Brenda, kitty em