let us hold hands, make a circle
together we can heal.

Amen! to that

So emotional and powerful. That ending as ddavidd said amen to that

Miss Dagmar,

a truly wonderful piece fro you. Healing certainly is a process, and never an easy one. But the results can be so life changing.
Much warmth
Michael :)x

Everyone around us is experiencing such unpleasant things. Though they try to express that they are happy and living a trouble free life, I don't think anyone in this world is happy. All of us are going through Pain, depression, or broken heart etc and they all lead to darkness in the end.

We all become habitual to it, Start living on it because darkness never disappoints us. Instead, it feeds us like it's own children.
Feeding us the shattered dreams of ours, and making us believe that truth is a lie.
It resides in our heart and we don't even realize until it's too late for us to recover. We give up on everything which could bring hope.

I love this very beautiful message that you have shared with all of us through this poem of yours.
Often, we go too deep in the arms of the darkness that healing or recovering from that looks very difficult. Healing is a slow process, but it's possible to heal from the scars left by darkness.
All we need is the strength to fight the darkness and if we start listening to each other, help each other in good or bad we can heal each other's heart.
There will be no more agony and once the sun of trust and truth shine in our hearts, we will no longer be called as the children of darkness.

Only by holding each other hands, We can make this world a better place. Maybe that's why our mother earth looks like a sphere or a circle. It's natural environment works as a circle and if we keep on holding our hands, one day we will cover this beautiful planet with hope.
Beautiful message, wonderfully written.

Miss Dagmar, All the best!

Thank you guys all of you so very much for your comments and it feels good to know that I.have such amazing support.

Quite often poetry is born of dark times and thoughts. It is an unfortunate but simple truth.

Every dark thing is however something of an inspiration.

What you have conveyed is fantastic.

Craig

Congratulations on your HM. A wonderfully insightful piece that really captures the physicality and emotion of pain and gives the message of hope through empathy for others. Loved it Best wishes Milly x