A very deep piece, and well written with use of metaphors
Well done
Michael :)

Often, love goes haywire and in those moments we forget how much efforts we have given to bring it into existence.
Very few of us, in real, get that chance to live with the person we love the most for all our life.

Amrita, the poem flows very smoothly, and tells us that even the most sacred thing in the world, love, can become painful if not treated well.
It can easily be manipulated and turns our hearts against each other leaving those flowers of love to be withered and decayed.
Flowers of love which takes not much time to blossom, but falls apart slowly and slowly, like a dying rose leaves.

The content of the poem is really strong. Tone of the poem is about how love produces trust in our hearts, if we give proper care to it and how it always dies when we take all those necessities (warmth, affection, enthusiasm) love needs and requests us to bloom once again.

I have no idea how close I got myself to the interpretation of this poem or how I unfolded this beautiful poem. I only wrote about what I felt in every single word of this poem.

All the best!

Love like life in my opinion is what we make it. Fantastic write

All the best

Lovely use of extended metaphor here with some wonderful descriptive writing throughout.

Take care and all the best,

Ben

Possibility, to pain. Beautifully crafted.
Well done.
Catherine x

Congratulations on your HM. Best wishes Milly x

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I’ve read poems which describes what love is about and
how it works. This though is different. I like the usage of language,
the metaphors and the simplicity of it. We all have different
views about love and this speaks how love can be nurtured
and perhaps healed…a very nice read!