Mjchael one interesting yet to me sad one. I picture a clock and the pendulum eventually stops. It just don't work any longer. I also see emotions who are not at their best anymore. Add to my favorite. You got my attention here. All the best hugs

Love all the metaphors Michael. A sad tale of love's end, beautifully set out and worded :-) x
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Michael, such a poignant write. A lost love, learning to let go and the pain with all of it. So well done- hugs-

I've read this countless times now and still find no words...

All the best
Em

No words...you know how I relate with this. Just brilliant once again!

Great poem, I love the format as well, you have really mastered it!!