by Walter Dec 15, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You can't put me on hold |
I wish I had the ability to write like you. |
by Walter
Thank you Ruth |
by mossgirl19
I think this is very clever job Walter. Your rhyme scheme is not really perfect but it does not sound forced which as Em says, is like music to my ears. The title is just clever and it's amazing how you dropped it at the end of the poem. It worked well. Lovely. |
by Walter
Thank you mossgirl19. I am grateful for all your comments. This was one of those rhymes that literally wrote itself as I put pen to paper. |
Oh my word Walter! Never mind the content, which is so cuttingly perceptive ... your rhyming is flawless! I don't think I've ever seen such a structure like this. Genius! :-) x |
by Walter
Thank you Kitty! Your comments are so generous and I am so glad that you liked it ;) x |
by Em
Absolutely loved the rhyming here Walter it's like music to my ears |
by Walter
Thank you for your words Em... I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. |
by Robert Long
this is so deep and true for may. I love the flow and how i could feel everything. It was written beautifully and if you ever need anything im here. |
by Walter
Thanks Robert, I really appreciate your comments. :) |