Comments : Infection

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Long

    this is so deep and true for may. I love the flow and how i could feel everything. It was written beautifully and if you ever need anything im here.

    -Robert

    • 7 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Robert, I really appreciate your comments. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely loved the rhyming here Walter it's like music to my ears
    Fantastic
    Em x

    • 7 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you for your words Em... I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.
      x

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh my word Walter! Never mind the content, which is so cuttingly perceptive ... your rhyming is flawless! I don't think I've ever seen such a structure like this. Genius! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Kitty! Your comments are so generous and I am so glad that you liked it ;) x

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I think this is very clever job Walter. Your rhyme scheme is not really perfect but it does not sound forced which as Em says, is like music to my ears. The title is just clever and it's amazing how you dropped it at the end of the poem. It worked well. Lovely.

    • 7 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you mossgirl19. I am grateful for all your comments. This was one of those rhymes that literally wrote itself as I put pen to paper.

  • 7 years ago

    by ruth lalnuntluangi

    I wish I had the ability to write like you.

    • 7 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Ruth