by Rhinehalt Dec 16, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A sweet scent in the air, |
by mossgirl19
Oh my Phantom, this is heart-wrenching!!! You have so brilliantly gave me the picture of what's happening the moment he was taken away and the way you have incorporated the clock, the third ticker, at the end of the poem is just amazing! I have lost a very special person in my life and yes, it is an echo of tears and laughter blending every time my heart remembers she is gone...and I feel too that the earth is so much sweeter. Well done and glad that you are posting new stuff! |
by Rhinehalt
Thank you kindly and I' m glad my poem touched you so much. This is about my brother, who passed away on August 11th this year. He was napping on the couch, Mom was watching the tv and I was baking a cake. He passed on in the sweet scented night. |