Comments : You Deserve Better

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A desperately sad poem but very well rhymed and structured.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by D.Rose

      Thank you much

  • 6 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Waiting for the day to finally be at peace and be free again. I cannot wait to be that start that he could never reach.. Thank you for this... Short, simple and straight to the point. I love it!!