by Robert Long Dec 19, 2017
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As we leave the room |
A captivating light hearted follow on. It raises interest in the reader as to why the newly created vampire resisted the temptation of an easy meal. Leaving it with open questions is an excellent ploy to ensure reader loyalty. Best wishes Milly x |
by Robert Long
Thx milly. You and Ben tbh are loyal to me and I appreciate it so much. I try to make it good and I did apparently. Thank you for feedback and take care as well |
by Ben Pickard
Dark and darkly humorous in places, Robert. I will be on hand to read the next instalments should you decide to post them. |