I love the imagery and metaphors!

A beautiful piece of free verse, Michael - a style of writing you are fast becoming a master of round these parts.

Take care and I hope you are well,

Ben

Just had to nominate this

I would have guessed you'd written this if I hadn't seen your name Michael. It's beautiful :-) x
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Ahhh just beautiful and sweet, Michael. Have to agree with Ben, it's hard not to be amazed by your free verse.

Michael you have a way with words and capture the readers eye. While reading I don't know whether I should laugh or be sad. I certainly picture someone enjoying his drink or drinks and it sure works Miracles. We are feel ing good and numb. So glad it was nominated. For some reason I was a little to late. All the best and hugs to your