by CJ Maleney
Gotta admit I found this a little glitchy to read at times but it still kept me hooked. |
Thank you for your time and nomination Craig. I agree the editing and rhyme scheme could have been formatted better... I posted it from my phone, I'll edit as soon as I can. |
This made me break out in tears. It really don't matter where we from we are all living human beings and we deserve the best. Unfortunately the way society is going there is not to many who have compassion. I am glad that this was nominated. Add to my favorite. All the very best. |
by Em
This is so very emotional and honest. It's such ashame that people still feel the need to ask these types of questions etc. In my opinion it doesn't matter where someone is from aslong as they're a honest, nice person. |
by Ben Pickard
A raw and biting piece of poetry. Well done on this - despite its length, it kept me reading with real interest until the end. |
Thank you for your time Ben |
A deep and emotional piece fired with emotion and darkness. An honest brave write that lets the world know what's going on. Well deserved nomination. Best wishes Milly x |
Thank you for your kind words |
by mossgirl19
Congrats on the win, Fredy. A poem of character and strength! |
Congrats on your win |
by naaz
Congratulations! |
by C Cattaway
Wonderfully written. Congratulations on your win. |
by Kireasha L
I don't pretend to understand the struggles, poverty, and violence your country suffers. I do know that when people come together (from across the globe) and begin to embrace one another's society issues, change is possible. Because you've decided to write this brave piece, I will no longer be ignorant to the political disasters in El Salvador and what it is doing to the people. My prayers will be with you and for your country. Congrats on the win!!!!!! |