This is time to me

by Dagmar Wilson   Dec 22, 2017


If I had ever transferred some of my time in to a secret bank account
it still would not have grown interest.
What is time?.

Something that is not promised or guaranteed
you have to spend wisely, don't waste it
divide equally.
And the list goes on.

Mine is comparing to a slow cooker
the battery has been stripped of its high motivation
the patience however has tripled.

I now can sit down
let things slide,
my time is precious.

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I loved the metaphors that give a refreshing take on the passing on time. An excellent piece that has to go on my favourites. The different comparisons of time for example being like a slow cooker. and the battery being stripped of its high motivation are sheer genius. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Dagmar

    All said so truthfully as ever in your work, and a really well written piece.
    Well done lady. I would have nominated this, but all out sorry
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you Michael and don't worry. Glad you read it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely love this :) time is definitely precious.. I think cocker should be cooker though?

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I love this Dagmar, and love how you've expressed how time slows yet patience increases. Brilliant! :-) x
    =^.^=

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