Comments : Heart on your sleeve

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Glad you're all good Brenda. Love the content and excellent rhyming style of this! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Miss Kitty!

  • 6 years ago

    by Asma

    Good luck to you :)

    Normally if a beau is untrue
    You tell him to go to hell and move on.

    That's the woman of 2017-2018. :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      So very true Asma, lol. I learned that the hard way more than once. I finally have my true love, he's my forever...

  • 6 years ago

    by Walter

    I like this Brenda, you have included all the pertinent details that go along with feeling this way even though as you say this was just something bouncing about your head. It's still great to write about something that we aren't personally feeling at the time.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Walter, thank you so much. Those things bouncing around need to be written down, I know you understand this.

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Amazing write Brenda glad you shared

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Dagmar! Hugs to you-

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Extremely powerful and honest

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Em, one of those things, you know, gotta get it out on paper.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good to hear all is well, Brenda, although I am aware that sometimes we take things too literally round here. If all my poetry was to be taken too seriously, I would have hung, drawn and quartered myself a hundred times by this point!
    Well rhymed and well written throughout.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Ben, I had to giggle at your reply. We do take things sometimes too seriously. Take care-

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Completely understandable. It's hard to go out there and let your heart live loud and proud when it's so easy to get knocked down, to get the spirit knocked out of us.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Mary Anne! It definitely makes you gun shy.

  • 6 years ago

    by Stephanie

    It's not that easy to face another day
    Strength is really important

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      It is indeed Stephanie, thank you so much-