by Walter Dec 26, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I often imagine you close |
by mossgirl19
A very beautiful heart breaking piece. I can feel the yearning very much. Beautifully worded and nice rhythm. |
by Walter
Thanks so much Mel |
by Ben Pickard
A terribly sad write but one that is well rhymed and well written. I'm not sure whether that means much to you when the topic is so personal, but you have conveyed your emotions with real skill here. |
by Walter
Thank you Ben for your comments. I actually wrote this a long time ago but it's strange how you never forget. |
by Brenda
A heartfelt write nicely rhymed. People come into our lives, some stay, others do not. As much as we sometimes want them back, they are gone for a reason. Take care- |
by Walter
Thanks Brenda and yes, if you believe in fate, then everything happens for a reason. |
by Em
So very sad and yearning.. We can't change what has happened but we can only hope |
by Walter
So very true and living in the past is not living |