Comments : Vanish

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    So very sad and yearning.. We can't change what has happened but we can only hope

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      So very true and living in the past is not living

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    A heartfelt write nicely rhymed. People come into our lives, some stay, others do not. As much as we sometimes want them back, they are gone for a reason. Take care-

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Brenda and yes, if you believe in fate, then everything happens for a reason.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A terribly sad write but one that is well rhymed and well written. I'm not sure whether that means much to you when the topic is so personal, but you have conveyed your emotions with real skill here.

    Do take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Ben for your comments. I actually wrote this a long time ago but it's strange how you never forget.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A very beautiful heart breaking piece. I can feel the yearning very much. Beautifully worded and nice rhythm.

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much Mel