by CJ Maleney Dec 26, 2017
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
In this green and pleasant land |
by mossgirl19
When I read this I think of our local sugarcane workers here. Yes, working in the fields is really hard work and they are paid only around $2 a day. They are our unsung heroes as our sugar industry wouldn't survive without them. Great poem. |
by CJ Maleney
It's crazy to think that in this day and age people are working for so little, while the owners of these companies are worth millions. |
True hero's and hard labor. Fantastic write. All the best |
Unsung heroes indeed Craig! Fab, flowing poem :-) x |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you mad cat lady lol x |
by Brenda
Craig, a wonderful tribute to all the farmers of this world. My uncle had a farm, it's a hard life with very little time for relaxing. Well done with this- |
by CJ Maleney
A hard life indeed, and not one I would like to live. Yet for the most part they are happy. |
by Ben Pickard
Excellent poem, Craig. My only suggestion would be to change 'They work so hard well into the dark' to 'They work so hard, well into dark.' It still makes sense but by dropping the 'the' I feel it flows a little more smoothly there. Apart from that, the rhyming is effortless. |
by CJ Maleney
Merry Christmas to you and yours too dude, |