More people need to read this. Such an excellent write. We are all people and only one life to live. At the end there is one race called human. All the very best

Patrick,

A really interesting read of your perspective.
Third line (second verse) should it read 'I am' or 'A'
Enjoyed this
Michael :)

An interesting thought provoking poem. With a different view on life and death. You do raise some interesting points but I disagree with your last line that we all hate. There are people in this world who do hate and this can cause them to perpetuate crimes but for many people it is not an emotion they ever feel. Best wishes Milly x

Such a thought provoking write Patrick! I enjoyed the read and I especially love the 3rd stanza, it is so cleverly put. Great write here.