A very thought-provoking piece. It made my soul feel naked, in the sense that I'm left questioning life's purpose and the vulnerability of love itself. I like how it is sort of cryptic as well, as if you meant the voice to be. My only critique is that I felt the punctuation was too heavily placed and took away the ability for the words to freely roam. But that is simply my opinion. I didn't feel the punctuation to be necessary and it felt forced (especially the semicolons).