by Elizabeth Dec 31, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I've seen the back of your head |
by Meena Krish
Interestingly penned, seemed more like a letter you |
by Milo
I love metaphors. It's a challenge to continue to build up poem after poems with descriptive metaphors that makes you want to relate in a way that's endearing. Reading your poems this last few weeks is like waiting patiently for Amazon to hurry his/her ass up and deliver my package, I want more. Just an observation, you keep coming up with different but intriguing imagery with the same "white knuckle" phase, and I think it's brilliant. God only knows I don't want to be in that state of mind in real life, I'm suppose to be an adult with normal knuckles ha. Good poem, thank you. |
by naaz
Congratulations Elizabeth! |
by Milo
Congratulations! |
by Sushmita Mitra Chetri
Beautiful.... |