This is absolutely beautiful and glad to see it was nominated. All the best to you |
by Meena Krish
Neatly done and each Haiku stood out on its own |
by naaz
Brenda, to be honest, I am not a fan of winter. I don't like winter at all. It's a very lazy season, but there is another truth which is that I am a fan of your poems. |
by Brenda
Naazz, thank you so much for such a lovely in-depth commentary. Growing up where I usually always have snow in the winter months, you learn to either embrace it and find beauty or you go stir crazy. We had one of those snowfalls that had draped the trees in such beauty, it's quiet beauty and that started it all. I've seen ice storms that after they are over you can't help but admire how everything looks magical, the sun hits it and it just comes alive. Everything is muffled but you crunch as you walk. Sometimes that's the only thing you hear. As far as diamonds. When we were young and waiting for the bus in the morning, it would be dark out but the snow fluttered like diamonds. My brother and I would play a game of who got which chunk of diamonds. To this day I still see diamonds. I did check that count on line 3, I counted 5 syllables. It may be how we each pronounce a word. We read them differently. Thank you again- |
by Ben Pickard
Brenda, no words really other than this is a beautiful poem, beautifully done. |
by Brenda
Thank you ever so much Ben. Happy New Years to you also. |
by Em
This makes me fall in love with winter Brenda and my does that takes something which you obviously have. Wow |
by Brenda
Aww thank you Em. I appreciate you and glad I could make you fall in love with a season so many can't stand. |
by mossgirl19
My queen, your haiku strings are always mesmerizing! I really really loved this visually beautiful piece. Ahh, I am in awe of the magic of winter, and this piece captures the spirit nicely. Great work! |
by Brenda
Thank you ever much Lady Mel! I do really appreciate you! |
by Ren
Brenda, this is such a gorgeous piece. I LOVE the winter. I mean, love love LOVE it. My favorite season. I welcome the cold with open arms whenever it grants us the short amount of time we get with it every year (and where I live, we don't get much). It actually snowed here a couple of weeks ago, and I stood outside on my porch at four o'clock in the morning wondering if the world was ending or if I was just dreaming. I hadn't seen or touched snow in almost ten years. It was such a lovely and unexpected treat :) You did an amazing job in capturing the chilly beauty of winter! |
by Brenda
Awww thanks Ren! Isn't it magical when you haven't seen it for so long? I had a paper route as,a kid and delivered on a snowmobile. Did you ever watch the movie- "Stepmom" with Susan Sarandon? When her and her daughter went out on horseback with the snow falling, it was magical. I tried to capture those moments. |
by Michael
Miss Brenda |
by Brenda
Thank you so much Michael! I felt I had to celebrate a season we all usually shy away from. |
by Stephanie
I agree with Ren. Undoubtedly winter is the best. Very beautiful poem |
by Brenda
Thank you so much Stephanie. I appreciate your warm thoughts. |
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Best wishes Milly x |
by Michael
Miss Brenda, |
by mossgirl19
Congratulations, Queen Brenda! A breathtaking piece that truly deserves the win. |
by Brenda
Thank you all so much! I truly appreciate your kind thoughts and wishes. |
Congrats Brenda |
Congrats on your win Brenda |
by Brenda
Thank you Nams and Dagmar! I appreciate your well wishes! |
by naaz
Congratulations Brenda! |
by Ben Pickard
Brenda, this is sublime and fully deserved the win - well done! |
by Brenda
Thank you Naazz, also for nominating this. |
by Meena Krish
Nicely done Brenda with this...Congrats on the Win! |
by Brenda
Why thank you Meena! Congratulations on your win also. Loved it. |
by Hope
Love it....I see the scenery.... beautiful. |
by Brenda
Thank you so much Hope. |
This is beautiful! :) |
by Brenda
Thank you so much! |