Abstract, this is beautiful, I can feel the love, subtle and bittersweet, in your words. I just feel that the flow could improve if you work on where to break the lines. It could give your poem a different intensity or weight. A friend poet once told me that reading your poem aloud can help you identify where you need to break the lines and start a new line. But don't doubt about it, I absolutely loved this and I felt your emotions.

Abstract P

This piece shows your gritty determination with love.
Well written, and a nice flow
Michael :)

I still love him very much.