Please don't

by Victor   Jan 4, 2018


I'm so scared right now
There's somebody in my house
I can hear the footsteps
I can hear his voice
It sounds so slimy
It sounds so greasy
I feel like I'm about to die
And my heart is pounding out of my chest
Oh god
He's right outside my room
He's knocking so hard on the door
How can it even hold?
The truth is, it can't
He's standing at the foot of my bed
I'm looking up at him, bawling my eyes out
"D-Dad?"

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  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    The undertone of abuse and the child begging 'please don't' to his father is heartbreaking. Really well written with the suspense and the twist :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this. The build up and final twist were excellent. A well deserved nomination. Well done. Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Oh my goodness.. The build up of this, the suspense.. So many questions going around my mind right now. Nominated

  • 6 years ago

    by Avarna

    I F'CKING LOVE IT.

    Y'all future king.

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