by Victor Jan 4, 2018
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You've been handed everything in your life |
A strong message throughout, a cry for a fairer system and then those final two lines "so please die quickly so I can take your place" was brilliant Changing the dynamics completely in one brief swoop. Mist enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x |
by Avarna
Again, like my previous comment, Y'ALL KING AND DADDY AF. You can rule me any day ;) |