Jan 4,2018

by Everlasting   Jan 4, 2018


It was in there, within a ripple,
while I was walking at the shore of my life,
that I felt the need to stop
to observe a seagull
that was flying towards the horizon.
I then sat on a big coral rock made of love
as I got lost in clouds of doubts
But then there came
a wave of thoughts
that splashed my mind with clarity
as rays of hope
illuminated my heart...

I had always thought To find some answers i had to keep swimming deeper,
But somehow, I surfaced back and I found some

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  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this, I like this very much and the subtle
    rhyming with in between tongue twisting thoughts
    as well as the coastal image...a nice read.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I love the coastal imagery. There is something about being out in the fresh air that brings a whole world of questions buzzing out into the open. Sometimes it's not even about finding an exact answer sometimes it's just about recognising the questions exist. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you for your comments, ladies

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I do love this. Often in life we walk around having all these questions but no answer. Will we ever find the answer? I would hope so. All the best and happy 2018.

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