Loved this. When you revisit the past it's never quite the same. I liked the thought of the scent of lavender having veen replaced with the smell of decay setting up nicely the feeling of decay. The last two lines sum up nicely with the uncompromising fact that death is silent and unexpected. It's that fact that encourages to live life to the best of our abilities because we never know when death will take us. This is interesting and thought provoking because it has much depth to ponder on. Best wishes Milly x |
Thank you so very much for your inspiring comment. Best wishes to you. |
by CJ Maleney
Ooh Dagmar this is fantastic. |
Thank you so much for your comment. |
by ddavidd
Still dark. Though very powerful. Deserved the nomination. |
Thank you kindly. It is appreciated |
Such a profound write Dagmar. Nostalgia is sometimes best left alone, it's never the same or as good as we remembered. Just excellent! :-) x |
Thank you |