What a sad piece. The imagery of a solitary bird flying with others of a different kind invisible enough nit to attract friend or foe. Who tries half heartedly to make a home but it's hollow without another to share it. No will to live he passes through the shroud of death alone and unoticed. Cleverly written this could also be a metaphor for a lonely man's life. Very enjoyable. Best wishes Milly x

I liked this a lot