Thank you for sharing g. Enjoyed reading. All the best

I like this a lot, Nazz. Well written and as you know, I do love a rhyming poem!

take care and all the best,

Ben

I like this a lot, Naazz. Well written and as you know, I do love a rhyming poem!

take care and all the best,

Ben

Black hole.

a wonderful piece of writing. So much emotion flows through your piece, and the ending with where you are without that special person. Albeit a sense of sadness
A very enjoyable read, and nominated for sure
Well done
Michael :)

Naazz, I am sad for you from this write. As,sad as it is you really did a wonderful job expressing this and nicely rhymed also. People are going to come into your life, some will be there from now on, others just fleeting moments. Live those moments and move on. Hugs my friend-

Ouch Naaz! This is so bittersweet. You sound so lost.
Totally agree with what Brenda said
A sad but really well written and rhymed poem :-) x
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After getting comments from such wonderful poets, I really feel like I am becoming a poet too.
Thanks everyone.

I love the impression this poem gives..
So beautiful...

I really love the way you write!!