RISE, FALL & RISE AGAIN

by Khadz   Jan 12, 2018


Anger,Despair, Hate and Sorrow,
Flush them out of your bone marrow.
Leave at bay all your tragic,
It’s time to bring out your magic.
For the universe is in love with everything positive,
So, be positive,think positive,live positive.
Hold onto thoughts that rise you like the sun,
Don’t be shattered by shattered by emotions that shoot you down like a gun.
Rise,Fall and Rise again,
The strength within is all you gain.
Never let your weaknesses overpower you,
Cuz agony is all that is left in you.
Rise,Fall and Rise again,
Love your deeds as you love yourself,
And always remember,positive thoughts help you create yourself.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ben

    Apologies double post!

    must've got excited lol ><

    • 6 years ago

      by Khadz

      Yea I got super duper excited :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben

    this is the first i've read from you, i have to say you write beautifully, great word choices and structure....

    "Rise,Fall and Rise again,
    Love your deeds as you love yourself,
    And always remember,positive thoughts help you create yourself."

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    this in particular was very thought provoking and frankly amazing!

    Great writing, i look forward to reading more from you.

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Khadz

      Awww thank you so much Ben much much appreciated dear :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Pratap Rudra

    Liked the phraseology and the message too...

    • 6 years ago

      by Khadz

      Thank you dear Pratap

  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Long

    this is only to me but it seems lines 7 & 14 are a bit long to keep a rhythm however the words of the poem make up for that. The way you put this is beautiful and well written. Good job.

    -Robert

    • 6 years ago

      by Khadz

      Appreciate your time and your comment on my work :) Thank you so much.

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