by Robert Long Jan 16, 2018
category :
Friendship, family /
family
i love my dad |
this one reminds me of my papa and this onemade me smile. |
by Robert Long
i really appreciate it Dagmar and Jamie. Thank you for the feedback :) |
I am glad that you did not change anything it is still an original. Adorable. |
by Purple Raven
I liked this. I especially liked the fact that you changed nothing within the poem itself and i think that is what makes it special. On a side note, i find is funny that it seems like everyone's first poem is some kind of rhyming one. |