Final Draft

by Aegis   Jan 19, 2018


I spent the past year trying to rewrite
you into my life,

just to have you erase the title.

Now I'm on a blank page that mocks
every word that comes to mind-

and I wonder if I should just
read a new book.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliantly metaphorical, short but packs a punch! Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Aegis

      Thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I think this is a really good piece. I liked the idea that a blank page can mock every word that comes to mind in particular. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Aegis

      Thanks:/ I'm afraid that this is one of those pieces that is difficult to be happy about. But I'm glad it does something for someone.-.

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