confusion (flawed diamond)

by CJ Maleney   Jan 21, 2018


IF

!Confusion!

Is but an emotional state

Caused by the inability to create

To compute and calculate

Or let imagination

Gravitate

!Rise!

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  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This reminds me of a joke/quote from a new show my friends and I are watching. It is titled "The Good Place" and the quote is coming from a demon, "You humans have too many emotions - you only need two: anger and confusion!"

    Despite the capitals of every line - which honestly is just my taste, this actually felt confusing and interesting and the style worked in your favor, as did all of the precise words you chose.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      No? we need 4!

      Anger, confusion. love and sometimes hatred.

      I understand hatred is not one we should wish to have. Then again It's necessary at times.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I loved the concept of the flawed diamond and the many other possibilities that it poses. The shape too is brilliant. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Hey Mills

      The diamond is a symbolic of us.

      None of us perfect, but perfectly imperfect.

      Sorry for the slow reply.

      Hope you are OK! Although I've not logged in for a while things still filter through.

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Very cool Craig! Those shaped writes are tough and you did beautifully and the flow is smooth-

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Bren, was just a little idea I had x

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is indeed a gem, Craig. With rhymes in there too, amazing!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Nice concrete or shape poem, Craig - really well executed with the rhyme thrown in there as well.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers Ben hope your well dude.

      Craig

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