Such a sad poem but hang in there it will get better.

Elizabeth, the thing that always blows me away about your writing is that you put it all out there-unflinchingly smack in the face out there. This is no different. A love poem written with a style only you can deliver. Well done-

I have to agree with Brenda. I love the hay you express yourself and you are letting everybody know how you feel. I don"t know myself how to write a love poem and love hurts as well. Glad to see it was nominated. All the best to you