by CJ Maleney
This is fantastic Meena, chuffed it's nominated |
by Scott Cole
Lovely little sad poem about love that want be. I like it a lot!!!!! |
by Michael
Meena |
by mossgirl19
Awww...this is classic, Ms. Meena. Beautiful but bittersweet. |
by Em
This is beautiful but it seems like this is a secret love unfortunately especially as love should be shouted from the rooftops in my opinion. Take care x |
A secret love who carries your pain with him yet is a love story for just the two of you never to be. It is so sad but so full of emotion. I am glad that it has been nominated. Beautiful Milly x |
by ddavidd
Haha you have such wondering soul Meena. |
by William Mae
Such a beautiful write, the ending very sad, a love scene never to be. One of only thoughts, love floating on wishes and thoughts. Though in a heart as real as the words on the page. Deep as the sky of the night. And yet sadly just as distant. You captured the whole theme of this particular love. |
by William Mae
I’ve come back to visit this write many times. It called me back again. Beautiful |
well written Meena! I wish you'll find that Knight that is meant for you |
by Phoenix ¥
I love this poem, it has a beautiful flow and a fitting ending . I can relate to your words x |