by ddavidd
This is amazingly strong poetry You like abby do not write often but when you do they are amazing. |
by silvershoes
You know, I have not read any of these comments until now, and it makes me so very sad. I wish I saw this sooner. |
I really enjoyed the concept of using the moon and earth as metaphors for love. A unique and captivating piece. Best wishes Milly x |
by silvershoes
Thank you, Milly. |
Very unique and interesting. All the best |
by silvershoes
Thank you! All the best to you as well. |
by Michael
wow! Jane, |
by silvershoes
Michael, thank you dearly for this and your other comment. To be honest, I am in such a sad, hollow place when I submit poetry, I do not read the comments. It’s too raw. But reading them now, I regret that I waited. Thank you again for your kindness. |
by Meena Krish
An interesting love story narrated with such vividness! |
by silvershoes
Thank you, dear Meena <3 |
Congrats on your win |
by Scott Cole
Congratulations on ur win!!!! |
by silvershoes
Thanks!! |
by Brenda
Jane, congratulations on your win! Your visuals are quite lovely. |
by silvershoes
Thank you, sweet Brenda. |
by naaz
Congratulations silvershoes... |
by silvershoes
<3 |
by Michael
Jane :0 |
by mossgirl19
A beautiful, strong piece, Jane. Congrats on your win! |
by silvershoes
Thank you so much :) |
I can only contently sigh after reading this. I know it's been a few months since you've posted a poem, and this truly soothed my soul. The ease and flow of nature, the untold stories of longing. The brevity is so lovely. |
by silvershoes
Thank you, MA. I know I’m late, but thank you. There are long stretches between my writes nowadays. |
by Meena Krish
Congrats on the Win!!!! |
There was somethibg striking about this poem as a whole but for me it was the first few lines that stood out. There really is something haunting about this piece. A thoroughly enjoyable read yet painful too. It's emotional and very raw. |
by silvershoes
Thank you so much. |
by Ben Pickard
As you are aware, Jane, I was...ahem...away when this piece deservedly took its position on the front page, but just know that I have read it and appreciated it; it is a wonderful piece of work, truly. |
by silvershoes
I am very happy that you enjoyed this poem! Thank you :) |
by gumshuda
Judging comment: |
by silvershoes
What a generous, kind comment. Thank you! |
by Paul Stotts
very unique view, one sided love is so strong. I'm living my karma right now, About 3 years ago a women 11 years older than me fell deeply in love with me. I didn't love her back though, I tried but couldn't "make" it happen. I left her after about a year, with my parents encouraging me to stay in the relationship, very strange I thought. I've recently found my twin flame, I truly whole heartedly believe this, I was so mean and took nothing serious part because she was half way across the country. I made a huge mistake, because this women is the love of my life. I haven't felt anything this strong ever. I wonder if she feels the same way about me, as I felt for the women I didn't love. This women that I love helped me get off meth, a drug I used heavily for more than 20 years. She gently guided me and explained that it was very unattractive, and it made me mean. Ive been clean almost 4 months now, with no desire to go back to that mess. I love this women so much, I know it comes off as immature, I don't know what to do, It's been years since I visited this poem site, I plan to put out new work in the very near future |
by Ben
Breathtaking.....added to favs :) |