Unrequited Love

by Milly Hayward   Jan 29, 2018


Gentle dove with crystal breath
with plumes that touch my heart
you bring a message of my death
when you say we'll be apart

I will not leave, here I must stay
for my heart remains with you
darling, love will find a way
if you could believe it too
---
Dove looked down with sorrow
and shook her head once more
there can be no tomorrow
for with me, you cannot soar

You are a cat, I am your lunch
what future could we share
I hear you, but I have a hunch
you'd eat me, without a care

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  • 4 years ago

    by Aiko (Dreamsurfer)

    Deep! It's true, unrequited Love feels like Death, a Flatline on the Pulse Monitor...

  • 6 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    I just recently signed in a month ago and look what i missed ? I enjoyed reading this until the end. And like others, I was amazed by the ending, so beautiful. Added to my favorites.

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you so much Poemelo Its lovely to know its being still read and that you enjoyed it. Made my day :) all my best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Very funny, Milly.
    Like the other comments, the punch line was unexpected, which is how comedy writes should be. I like humour, you know that and I appreciated this wonderfully paced write.

    Thank you x

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Michael. I like writing comedy but have to be in the right frame of mind lol. Really glad you liked it :) Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    A fabulous rhyme scheme and agreed with everyone a very unexpected yet funny ending well done

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    Haha! totally unexpected ending had me laughing my head off....absolutely priceless!

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Hellon, I'm really pleased that it made you laugh. It's some times hard to gauge humour lol

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