Oh Milly, how clever this is! I was heading a totally different thought and you threw a loop in there. Well done-

Oh Miss Milly :)

what a clever piece of writing. I was so involved way before you hit me with the end. Brilliant lady and very glad to see this pesky piece nominated
Much love
Michael :)x

Thank you Michael you really are lovely man love and best wishes Milly x

Very interesting and well laid out Milly I have to say I wasn't expecting that :)

All the best xx

Yay, Milly! That was unexpected! Clever and fun, you pull humor effortlessly.

This is so fantastic!! Completely unexpected punch line! This had me laughing so much. Clever write well done.

Thank you so much Dagmar for the nomination it really made my day :) much love Milly x

Haha! totally unexpected ending had me laughing my head off....absolutely priceless!

A fabulous rhyme scheme and agreed with everyone a very unexpected yet funny ending well done

Very funny, Milly.
Like the other comments, the punch line was unexpected, which is how comedy writes should be. I like humour, you know that and I appreciated this wonderfully paced write.

Thank you x

I just recently signed in a month ago and look what i missed ? I enjoyed reading this until the end. And like others, I was amazed by the ending, so beautiful. Added to my favorites.

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