To my Valentine

by deeplydesturbed   Jan 30, 2018


This year my valentine is special
Someone I hold close
It’s not the obvious choice for the day
But it’s who my heart has chose

A secret flirt here
A sly message there
Each time you’re on
I find myself twirling my hair

My heart is a flutter
My tummy is filled with butterfly(s)
Even on the darkest of days
You can turn it into blue sky’s

So this year I chose you
As selfish as it sounds
Having two people I care about
My heart is breaking down

I don’t want to lose either
But cant chose one over the other

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  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is sweet and sometimes it's difficult to choose one especially when it's cake, chocolate or biscuits hehehe joking aside fabulous sentiment/piece

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, nicely put. You are too cute!

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    So glad to see it was nominated.

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Dagmar!! And thanks for nominating the other one :) xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely Valentine quandary. Definitely worth the nomination (I like Michael was reaching for the button lol) best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams,

    Oh the curse of a choice! in a situation where it seems that you have your heart split between two. I love the way your piece flows, and rhymes, and at the end no resolution, just a difficult choice.
    Nicely put together and gets my vote this week lady, although there is no vote button uh? sorry my error already voted great! haha
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you michael!!!
      Sorry Mark beat ya to it!!!

      Thanks for all the love and comments and reading!! :)

      Xx

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