by Ya----Na
Perfect timing, perfect poem, perfect format! |
by Sunshine
How utterly beautiful :) I have mixed feelings about it, it makes me feel lonely, yet hopeful, then the whole image makes me feel sad again...as if reminiscing. I would love to share this somewhere if you don't mind? |
by Hellon
It was just a follow on after the discussion we had a few weeks ago about haiku. It's very much open to suggestions and...I do agree that the comma spoils the flow so..it will be removed :) |
by Jamie
To me- this is a senryu, because it deals with human emotion. And as a side note to anyone who thinks a haiku is anything but nature based is wrong. Anyway. |
This stood out to me as a haiku. I instantly saw one standing over a pilfered garden...with only the smell to remind them that this place once held beauty. |