Matt, a sad write indeed. Wonderfully done though and nicely rhymed. I felt your yearning throughout this.

That’s just unique great poem! We get shattered by those that thought they didn’t matter. How lost are they when people care so deeply. Beautiful words.

Lost love can haunt us for a long time after they have gone. A beautifully piece capturing very well the emotional hollow left by such an event. Effortless rhyming and a pleasurable read. Best wishes Milly x

So touching. Thank you for sharing. I would love your feedback one of mine. ????

i'm trembling so much since the 1st quatrain and each and every word following really stung. Quite a beautiful yet dangerous writing to be around. I appreciated it.

Lost love can throw us in darkness but as long as there is hope we shouldn't fear.

Very beautifully written. Matt

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful

Oh that feeling Matt! This is so relatable and beautifully expressed :-) x
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