Still more to come... (Part I)

by deeplydesturbed   Feb 5, 2018


A soul cracks into two
Much like a tree; struck upon by lightning
A heart is shattered into a thousand pieces
Much like a glass; dropped on a hardwood floor

A mind is clouded
Much like the sky; on a stormy day
A body is numb
Much like a drunk; when they’ve had too much

Destruction has been made
Like a tornado; on an already made path
Tears continue to flow
Much like a river; trying to connect to the sea

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  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    It's so compelling how you've connected these feelings with nature, it really compounds the pain. Excellent Nams :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Amazing write, Nams! Well done! And I'm glad to see it is nominated! Take care love <3

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Nams, this is so powerful-loved it!

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      thanks Brenda - still not complete :)
      But itll get there..

  • 6 years ago

    by Ocean Chant

    I think it's quite captivating the feeling of humanized environment here. Thank you for sharing ^^

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic

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