Comments : Tongue-Tied

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Um, Ren, wow now I am tongue-tied....I think I need to fan myself, very hot!

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Brenda! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! Glad you enjoyed, and I hope you get cooled off ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Jamie

    I love sex poems when they are done well, and in my opinion this is done well. The metaphors leave the reader to use their imagination and sometimes those are the best kind of poems. :).

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you, Jamie! I appreciate that and am glad you think it was done well :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like the way this reads, the gentle pull and tug, and the ease in the rhyme and rhythm. Very sensual without being cliche or overly descriptive. This was simple yet full of fire.

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and for your awesome comment! :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ren, it's funny how we write so little about something so awesome and natural! You've done a fantastic job with this erotic tale, capturing a beautiful moment between two people. Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much!! I really appreciate it! :)

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yay, dear Cowgirl, I need some fan here too! This is amazing, it's so engaging, with great control of the rhythm. It's also so detailed, and yet it's not just a typical descriptive tale, it's done so tastefully. :-)

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much beautiful Lady!! I'm so happy you liked it! <3

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    How did I miss this?! Wow. Beautifully subtle, and had my heart beating.

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thanks Tony :)