Spooky it makes me think of rats or a burglar. That's the trouble with the usual quiet of darkness as soon as there is a noise the imagination takes over. An enjoyable piece. Best wishes Milly x

Another great piece Miss Kitty,
reflecting on the darkness, the thing is that its not the dark, its whats in it that freaks us out!
A chilling poem all the same.
Much love
Michael :)x

Miss Kitty, when I first split up and moved out into a new place I would lay awake at night and hear all sorts of stuff. Of course my overactive imagination would be imaging the worse scenarios lol. It got better...well done with this-

This reminds me of when I was a kid and would lay awake at night, terrified out of my mind, after watching a scary movie with my older brothers (after relentlessly whining to them that I wasn't a scaredy-cat and I wanted to watch it, too!) Little did I know how much I truly did fear and wonder what was lurking in the shadows of the night...

Excellent write!!

Thank you, good woman; I shall sleep well tonight!

I am a scary cat still am. No scary movies for me otherwise I will be up hearing all kind of noises. All the best to you

Fantastic

Wait! What happens at the end? Lol
I love this!