Sweet lady!! This is so beautiful! And that last line gave me chills! Love it! <3

Beautiful, Mel.

All the best,

Ben

Competition huh?
You won't let me win that's why you posted the same week.
Jokes apart!
Mel, it's so good to see you back with full on power and whenevr you write you definitely take my breath away.

Very beautiful

Guys, My soul is texting this comment.

Enchantingly beautiful. Great write!

Miss Mel,

Your romantic side flows all through your beautiful piece. Love it!
Much love
Michael :)x

I love the purity of this, and also how you have found your sense of self and individuality, not lost it. I think that's equally important. Balancing one another's weight without compromising who each of you stand for. Very sweet poem in its simplicity and strength of heart. It seems few can define the true beauty and wonder of two people becoming one and growing, as one...

I loved this poem when you published it on the Valentines Thread and it is beautiful. I know the breath taking away feeling of being in love and I am so glad that you do too. Its a lovely romantic read. All my best wishes Milly x

It is lovely to see that love exists in such a beautiful and special way.

Very Nice!!!

I never found my individuality
until I tumbled into your loving arms and wrestled in your weight against mine.

The magic and mystery of two people becoming one-
It never fails to take my breath away.

Aww. You are always clever with words.

I have no idea which line to pick out as a favorite
because they are all so tender and passionately written.
In this short verse there is a fire and I like the image!
Well done!

Wonderful!!

Your work always takes my breath away

Hi.

the imagery in your first line is both sensual and evocative. Your sentiments of the magic and mystery of two people becoming one, is one I share. Just like the sun heart slowing descending onto the cooling blue ocean. I like too, the explosion of thousands of dandelion seeds - an exquisite way to describe the climax of love.

Most enjoyable.

A blend of love and sensuality. Great work!!