Valentine

by Alex Penuelas   Feb 12, 2018


Happy
"I can't believe we need to designate a date
As an obligatory time to showcase love
To your significant other, all the while
Feeding the commercial machine that
Is full of overpriced flowers, chocolates,
And other material things,
Instead of acknowledging that
Love, like the stars, is timeless"
Day

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Alex I think you are right it has got too commercialised but it is still nice to have a day to celebrate love. It doesn't have to cost money it can be just a celebration of the love you have in your life :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Alex

    Fair comment my friend

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I hear you Alex, well said! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ocean Chant

    Oh I really like this, it feels like the right writing regarding the thematic

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