Portrait of you

by Walter   Feb 13, 2018


If you were my portrait then I'd be your brush
Painting your colours so vivid and lush
To capture the beauty of your aura so bright
My attention to detail spans into the night

Every time I see you, I always see more
Even more alluring than the time just before
I follow your contours of sights never seen
And struggle to convey perfection to a screen

And even a photo won't show any more
I cannot display what my eyes just saw
You’re permanently portrayed inscribed in my mind
Something more beautiful I know I won't find

To paint a portrait of you a work of art
Is impossible with hands and only my heart
Could possibly capture a picture so divine
This image of you my one valentine

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  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is stunningly beautiful

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Em for your lovely compliment!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A nice little romantic write for your valentine...just one thing
    this line here:

    To paint a portrait of your work of art
    ^^Did you mean " to paint a portrait of you a work of art"..?
    Sorry could not get that straight,,a typo I guess...

    All in all a sweet little write...keep penning :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Meena...I missed that one!

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful and fabulously romantic. A perfect tribute to show someone how much you care. Glad to see it's nominated. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much Milly....and yes, to Dagmar too for nominating!

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Walter! Everyone wants someone to see them like this, to be thought of as beautiful by the one they love. You're so good at these swoony writes, I love your style and rhyming :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Kitty for your kind and lovely comments! I have also loved your distinctive style of writing from the start :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ocean Chant

    This is quite sweet. Enjoyed it ^^

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Ocean Chant!

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