by Kitty Cat Lady Feb 13, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I really am so sorry |
by yogi73
Lovely poem...the heart wants what the heart wants, and also what it doesn't. Well done...love the flow and ease of the rhyming |
Thanks Yogi! :-) x |
by William Mae
Sometimes the feeling just comes up short. No wow factor, no deep stirring. You nailed the feelings and emotion of that in this write. Very well done. |
Thanks so much William :-) x |
by MoonMaiden
The rhyming was spot on which made the poem flow elegantly.. Thought somewhat sad, the meaning behind it is powerful & sometimes letting go isn't a easy task. But you put it into a perspective that makes sense. (: |
Thanks so much K, I appreciate that :-) x |
by mossgirl19
Awww...lovely but with a sad theme, Kitty. Loved your rhyming. |
Thanks so much Mel :-) x |
by Ya----Na
Kitty, very beautiful poem about unrequited love. |
Thanks so much Shane :-) x |